So, how will this work?

Okay - so we got the opening post out of the way, now lets plan out how this is going to work. The way I see it, I will start writing things, all kinds of things, and just post them. That will give you the opportunity to tell me what you think (i.e. - is it good? is it shit?). As we go along, I'll also be updating my trials and tribulations of becoming a screenwriter as they happen. I'm hoping this will be interesting to read, and if not, then we'll figure something out. So, up first I am going to post the beginning of a short story. I think I'll put that up tomorrow for you to start disecting. I will say that not everything I put up will be finished, not everything will be great, but everything will be focused on 1 goal - that of making me write more. How's that sound? Good? Good. If you have any thoughts leave them in the comments section, otherwise I look forward to some feedback on my first short story I post.